雅思餅圖小作文范文《服務問卷》

　　餅圖作文也是雅思考生會遇到的，但是考生往往難以寫好這一類的作文。下面，小編就為大家送上一篇雅思餅圖小作文范文，供大家參考。

　　話題：

　　The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

　　范文

　　The pie charts compare visitors’ responses to a survey about customer service at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and in 2010.

　　It is clear that overall customer satisfaction increased considerably from 2005 to 2010. While most hotel guests rated customer service as satisfactory or poor in 2005, a clear majority described the hotel’s service as good or excellent in 2010.

　　Looking at the positive responses first, in 2005 only 5% of the hotel’s visitors rated its customer service as excellent, but this figure rose to 28% in 2010. Furthermore, while only 14% of guests described customer service in the hotel as good in 2005, almost three times as many people gave this rating five years later.

　　With regard to negative feedback, the proportion of guests who considered the hotel’s customer service to be poor fell from 21% in 2005 to only 12% in 2010. Similarly, the proportion of people who thought customer service was very poor dropped from 15% to only 4% over the 5-year period. Finally, a fall in the number of ‘satisfactory’ ratings in 2010 reflects the fact that more people gave positive responses to the survey in that year.

　　附：雅思餅圖小作文怎么寫?

　　1、選擇最重要的一個點放在第一個寫

　　從范文中可以看出，換工作，找工作和讀書是作者首先提到的，因為這是選擇搬家的'主要原因。被囊括在其他里的是不那么重要的原因或者只是一小部分人群，所以他們可以被放在結尾再寫

　　2、讓句子容易被理解

　　在寫小作文的時候，應該盡可能將信息串在一條邏輯線路上，使文章更容易理解。

　　在餅狀圖中，最能體現邏輯的就是進行對比，將文章重心放在描述兩張圖的相似點和不同點上，而不是將他們分開描述。

　　如果分別描述圖表，閱讀的人就需要不斷的在兩張圖之間切換，自己去發現兩張圖的不同點在哪里。可以看到在范文里面，作者并沒有這樣做。

　　3、語言要豐富

　　在任何小作文中，這點都是很重要的，考生不應該不斷的重復同一種結構。寫餅狀圖時最重要的句子就是描述比例的那幾句。

　　通常考生都會用 "the proportion of..."or "the percentage of..."

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